February 13th, 2023:
This week we met with partial members on Monday evening, and most people on Wednesday evening. On Monday, two other members and I checked in with each other on progress with new storyboards made for the first production pass on Friday. I presented this short clip of the painter standing at his easel painting.
I will also be working on storyboards showing the painter becoming more increasingly frustrated with the painting iterations as they stack up in piles around the room.
February 15th, 2023:
I also made this before the Wednesday evening meeting and presented it to the group and it seemed to be pretty well received. This was based on the idea of having the painter iterate on the paintings and it shows a progression of him painting and pulling back and showing more and more discarded painting iterations scattered around the room in like a faux-time-lapse sort of way. The feedback I got from the group was to maybe add little moths that flutter in from the edge of the frame and just land on furniture around the room as time passes and they kind of creep in on the painter en masse.
This is the revised version I made after receiving feedback from the group, now with extra moth-age.
February 17th, 2023:
My group reacted very positively to my new boards which I appreciated. I am also glad I got some good feedback on Friday to focus even longer on the shot of the painter from behind in the animatic and make sure that more of the paintings are in view/clear to the audience.
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